Thursday, October 4, 2012

Care to critique my first poem? Its very short?


Question


Care to critique my first poem? Its very short?
The walls of my heart collapse


Answer


wow....that is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD...brgreat job whoever you are...bri luv it!!!! amazazazazaingbryou should continue to rite poems wthat talent...bri cant rite to save my life and i luv poetry even though sometimes i dont really understand it....lol



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