Care to critique my first poem? Its very short?

Question

Care to critique my first poem? Its very short?
The walls of my heart collapse

Answer

wow....that is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD...brgreat job whoever you are...bri luv it!!!! amazazazazaingbryou should continue to rite poems wthat talent...bri cant rite to save my life and i luv poetry even though sometimes i dont really understand it....lol

Care to critique my first poem? Its very short?

Question

Care to critique my first poem? Its very short?
The walls of my heart collapse

Answer

wow....that is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD...brgreat job whoever you are...bri luv it!!!! amazazazazaingbryou should continue to rite poems wthat talent...bri cant rite to save my life and i luv poetry even though sometimes i dont really understand it....lol

Care to critique my first poem? Its very short?

Question

Care to critique my first poem? Its very short?
The walls of my heart collapse

Answer

wow....that is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD...brgreat job whoever you are...bri luv it!!!! amazazazazaingbryou should continue to rite poems wthat talent...bri cant rite to save my life and i luv poetry even though sometimes i dont really understand it....lol